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improvised xgo go go by ~TyrantOfPants:iconTyrantOfPants:



i'm not fond of
the bitter taste left
between my
tongue and teeth
when
i think that
man has lost poetry
lost it to television
and to politics
eloquence has given way to arrogance and
ignorance
all perpetuated
and
punctuated by
each and every
politician
and
priest
and
poet
each and every
time
they
speak in malice

i wish to once more unravel
tall tales told
of fantasy and romance
of lovers and villains
where the only oil burns in lanterns in
great libraries named of kings
and not for presidents

i wish also to unravel
white wool pulled
to blind a people
and make them forget

(i am wondering
how can a white wool
blur the universe to grey?)

i fear i may be the first and only
to make this discovery
and thusly i
must be
the first to climb the mountain
and shout
and let the echoes of my revelation
thunder down as in spring
swelling rivers to flood
to wash the world in epiphany
(let understanding be their ark)
let this seep
to the deepest valley
and
let all of man sing
sing in every tongue

sing in poetry
©2005-2009 ~TyrantOfPants
:icontyrantofpants:

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Haven't posted any poetry in some time, decided to try for an improv

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:iconradiophonic:
Very elegent and inspirational. Why haven't I come to read in your gallery :roll:

I believe many of us wish for the same things you do. We've progressed as a society and made it a point to regress.

This is simply wonderful.

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My real sig is on vacation somewhere
art prints by radiophonic
:iconbark:
As long as there are people who worry about these things, society will stand. That number is probably much larger than we could guess. this was an improv? with lines like ..."where the only oil burns in lanterns in great libraries named of kings..." and the white wool verses? boy howdy, that's good! more than good- eloquent.

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don't you just hate it when you're trapped and gnaw the wrong foot off?
:icontyrantofpants:
Thanks a whole lot Mr Bark, those were my favorite lines too.

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**swoosh** :sprint:

Will work for :worship:
:icontyrantofpants:
Thanks, especially for the favorite.

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**swoosh** :sprint:

Will work for :worship:
:iconradiophonic:
You're quite welcome. It has a wonderful beat poetry feel to it (my preferred genre). I also have a soft spot for improvised, "on the fly" poems. ;)

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My real sig is on vacation somewhere
art prints by radiophonic
:iconmrlacuna:
Immense poem, quite, yet profound, (I hope that makes sense...) I can almost see a wise man reading the words aloud as if to enlighten the masses. 'Tis good.

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Please, don't drink the emperor.
:icontyrantofpants:
Thankee

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**swoosh** :sprint:

Will work for :worship:
:iconfancydelic:
Indeed, it seems that we are losing that daily poetry in life. What left in our popular society is truly beautiful anymore? Few things. Tragedy.
:iconmoaeltaile:
wow what and ode

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If I’m going to trip in front of her let me do it on my own terms and of my own inability to stand straight.

RainDownMyBlues ([link]) wrote that awesome line

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